Posted by: Krutika on: July 4, 2008
Once on a fine morning (technically approx 2 in the night), i penned this poem. I have used blank verse which is my favourite style of writing.Maybe it is because there are no hassles of rhyming..(grin)
It was written in December 2006 out of a whim and i got it published in the Valentine’s Day issue of EVE TIMES, in 2007..Eve Times is a special feature newsletter of the TIMES OF INDIA.
I was overjoyed to see my poem in print in the local edition of the top newspaper of India(who will not be?) and it gave me renewed inspiration to keep writing..:-)
Feedback is welcome;-)
its all illusion..!
when you use your brain, instead heart.
Very sensual. Though i don’t know if that was the emotion with which this was written.
Well written.
Good one…
But for whom is it written?? [;)]
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wow…beautiful…some lines just stay inside…especially the first line…beautiful…from ur posts, u r really an inscrutable girl…in a mixed way…
That was really great one!!
woderful poem
what a beautiful little poem
When love is good it is exactly the way you described it. I love love, it’s a great feeling indeed.
cute blog
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September 9, 2008 at 5:01 am
Hello Krutika,
Nice refreshing lines there in your poem
Congrats, that’s an appreciable talent, really.
Was cheered when I came across your blog, trust me its an interesting read. Keep up the good work